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96 weeks ago @ Starlight Glimmer daily - House of Stars: Chapter 1 · 1 reply · +2 points

It's all good man.
That's what pre-reading and editing is for :D

Like I said, though, the idea is really solid. I like it.
the main thing might be to make it more clear that the story is happening in the future. It would require subtle changes that I wouldn't really be able to help with. it's one of those things that I would know if I read it, but I can't really provide an example. :D

96 weeks ago @ Starlight Glimmer daily - House of Stars: Chapter 1 · 3 replies · +2 points

the idea is solid.
some questions/thoughts that pop up in my head as I read:
Where are celestia and luna?
Why is there a presidential election?
Who's Bit Baron?
Twilight wouldn't freak out like that. At least, not that soon.

I realize some of the questions will probably be answered later in the story. Just sharing my first impressions. :D

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 0 replies · +2 points

OMG!
GUYS!
HEROFORGE.COM

SOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 2 replies · +1 points

I wanna watch some mlp now....
Too bad I cant

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 0 replies · +1 points

But at least he lived his dream right?

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 1 reply · +1 points

Because people know the feeling but don't really know what to say

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 1 reply · +1 points

Hmmm

*Intrigue Intensifies*

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 0 replies · +3 points

Well shit.

Though I'm still not suprised.
Tila Tequila was never gonna win any academic awards

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 1 reply · +1 points

Glad you're finally home.
Relax now.

Might I suggest Tanks for the Memories or Testing Testing 123 and some hot chocolate

119 weeks ago @ Equestria Daily - Premiere: Extended Equ... · 3 replies · +1 points

Was it that intense?

Maybe I'll read it when I get home.