IntenseDebate - jean leblanc

3 years ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +1 points

What a beautiful and powerful example of how repetition can be used effectively in a short poem.

4 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2020/04/... · 0 replies · +1 points

Beautiful!

4 years ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +2 points

I agree with what Marilyn said about the letting go in the last two lines. Also, I'm struck by the seven-syllable first line -- all the "weight" at the beginning, and the breakable dishes beneath. The dishes passively drying, not being flung across the kitchen in anger (if it's couples therapy that's being alluded to) -- wow, an entire domestic story condensed into these little lines. Beautiful poem.

4 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2020/01/... · 0 replies · +1 points

This is so simple and yet so deep. Even when we remember to look up, we can't always escape the to-ing and fro-ing of our world. Thank you!

4 years ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +2 points

Beautiful!

4 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2019/11/... · 0 replies · +2 points

Wow. Bravo.

4 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2019/10/... · 0 replies · +2 points

I love this.
Butterfly and/or political flavor-of-the-month.

4 years ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +1 points

Oh my goodness does this bring back memories. Thank you!

4 years ago @ tinywords - Auto Draft · 0 replies · +2 points

Perfect.

4 years ago @ tinywords - tinywords.com/2019/06/... · 0 replies · +2 points

WOW.

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