en-us https://www.intensedebate.com/users/651443 Comments by littlenikkii http://learning.writing101.net/nikki/blog/2009/09/13/feminist-poetry-admirations-and-thoughts-on-who-are-the-real-victims/#IDComment35200196 Thanks for the input guys, I had a rough week and was basically just spitting out whatever came to mind. I have no plan of ever turning this one in, so thanks for being honest with how it just didn't flow. I totally agree. I had a really hard time writing about this because I don't sympathize with anything that Rich said in her writing. It's a hard topic for me to be totally neutral about, and I was afraid of diving too far off the deep end with my opinions on feminism; once I got the intro done, I had no clue how to tie it in with a summary of all 3 poems. Worst paper I've ever written, so thanks for not being too harsh. If I would have gotten these comments earlier in the week, I would've been able to revise it signifigantly, but I suppose it's kind of a lost cause at this point. Look forward to better revisions in the future, and better writing too! Sorry about this one! :/ Sun, 20 Sep 2009 18:20:04 +0000 http://learning.writing101.net/nikki/blog/2009/09/13/feminist-poetry-admirations-and-thoughts-on-who-are-the-real-victims/#IDComment35200196