en-us https://www.intensedebate.com/users/653130 Comments by chrischartrand http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/#IDComment47973123 The desperation, longing and passion all come through perfectly. Love the backdrop of a Halloween party when we costume ourselves to be what we truly desire. Sat, 19 Dec 2009 15:29:58 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/17/dismissed-mingling/#IDComment47973123 http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/11/garage-door/#IDComment46826961 This swept me up and tumbled me along. The last paragraph is beautiful. Fri, 11 Dec 2009 22:26:17 +0000 http://www.washthebowl.com/2009/12/11/garage-door/#IDComment46826961 http://www.geektreasure.com/?p=534#IDComment34022263 Very clever story, I enjoyed it. Just like Eric, I'm a sucker for a good pun. Fri, 11 Sep 2009 18:50:58 +0000 http://www.geektreasure.com/?p=534#IDComment34022263 http://www.bishopneo.com/fiction/chances/#IDComment33981207 Time travel is hard to write, but you did a good job of it. There could be other ways of traversing time becides time machines. Perhaps the universe needs him for something big and kicked him forward so he could gather what he needed to then move back and save himself. Good job. Fri, 11 Sep 2009 14:54:25 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/fiction/chances/#IDComment33981207