I heard about the short on the Animation Show's website. I thought it looked pretty cool and thought that it would make a cool movie so this is pretty awesome. Also now that Tim Burton is involved it sounds even more awesome.
Hi Shane! Yeah I added the big question marks at the last minute to emphasize their confusion and to fill in the dead space. As I was colouring it though I considered removing them and I agree that it would probably work better that way. Having them freeze in anticipation with excited looks on their faces would make it funnier. I'm glad you like that last line. Chris was actually partially responsible for that line.
Thanks for all of your suggestions and for your continuing help and guidance,
-Tim
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