vivinfrance

vivinfrance

17p

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3 weeks ago @ http://princessr9.blog... - Six Word Saturday · 1 reply · +1 points

A weekend like what? Whatever - enjoy.

6 weeks ago @ http://princessr9.blog... - Six Word Saturday · 1 reply · +1 points

I should hope not.

52 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - Big Tent Poetry for 2/... · 1 reply · +1 points

I really enjoyed your process notes- that's much how I worked before prompts precluded the fallow period, and my poems are the worse for the more or less instant production line! Your poem was interesting, too.

54 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - Big Tent Poetry (1/28)... · 1 reply · +1 points

Absolutely brilliant. I love the quirky thoughts, the repetittion. Everything.

56 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - Big Tent Poetry - Popp... · 0 replies · +1 points

Well, it's great fun, and whoever said poetry had to be serious? Not me. You've sent me off to look for Kerouac poems. BTW, your process notes have defined rhyme rather than alliteration. I've just written a poem with all the rhymes at the beginning of each line.

59 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - 3WW CCXX/Big Tent Poet... · 0 replies · +1 points

I know exactly what you mean by the poem taking you off in a different direction. Countless times I have set out to write one poem and finished with another. Yours is a fascinating response to the prompts and I love the title.

70 weeks ago @ http://www.williamm49.... - INN OF HAPPINESS THE F... · 0 replies · +1 points

This story poem reminded me of Bonnie and Clyde. Very effectively told.

73 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - Big Tent Poetry (9/13)... · 0 replies · +1 points

I hope you will be able to move on from the half-eaten memories - at least from the horrors of flashbacks. You have written a brave poem, and I salute you.

80 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - Big Tent Poetry (7/30/... · 1 reply · +2 points

I like the way you use your imagination in this poem.
Last line: though or thought?

84 weeks ago @ AGGASPLETCH - Big Tent Poetry - Tend... · 0 replies · +1 points

Tears are pouring down my face as I write this: I've spent the morning trying, and failing abysmally to write a poem for my best friend, who died last night. Your poem is a marvellous example of what I should have been writing and couldn't.