@Kirith Kodachi No! Thank YOU for the excellent writing!

@CrazyKinux Oh you are a harsh master! But a funny one all the same!

Well I have BC5 (I originally got it to 5 for my Ferox and Drake), some great armour skills and pretty decent Shield skills, enough for full T2 mods all around anyway...

What sort of weaponry do you reccomend? I think it's high time I start training Projectiles...

Epic kill. That's awesome haha. How long did it take to take it from 100% shields to DEAD? Bet it was quite a while...

Mynxee, did you mother and father never tell you that teasing lonely locals in nullsec is mean? Hehe

Women in games always seems to excite some people, I remember playing Call of Duty with a girl once and our opponents were always like "WOOOWWWWW You are a gurllz?". Some people eh? It seems EVE is no exception.

Fun post this, particularly like that their scout was called "Wel Ard" haha - I'm imagining a big stocky cockney geezer inside a pod.

Quite the action packed post Mynx! How is the Hurricane? My BC experience in PvP is generally with a Harbinger and a few outings in a Drake...Never really done much with the Hurricane, primarily used it on my alt to salvage.

And so the story thickens even more. "We need to talk" she says, but what about? I ask! I'm scared, I'm invested in the story and I am intrigued. It's been great back and forth work from you and from Roc - keep the ride going and keep the drama flowing - the whole thing has been a refreshing tale so far but my thirst is FAR FROM QUENCHED.

Great work, it's great to have you on board with the Fiction Pack and you continue to provide great reasons for people to keep checking in week after week.

Slow to board the comment train here but enjoyed this one particularly the Vagabond which you "consumed greedily"...made me think of nasty nasty spiders :s

Oh and great image/photo Roc has done for you by the way!

Keep posting fiction or IC posts regularly and of a high standard and network amongst the other bloggers and it can only put you in good stead and serve to improve the community!

Make sure you get your work done matey, RL comes before EVE! We'll all still be here when it's done...Well, I will be anyway!

Well...this story is getting interesting and I'm very pleased to see it running concurrently on two separate blogs so we get both sides of the story. You and Roc have got a good dynamic and I think it's refreshing to see this sort of collaboration within the EVE blogs.

Keen to see how it all pans out for sure and especially liked the part about your Cynabal - I think everyone has felt something like that about a ship before and can relate to it!

Dialogue was nice and snappy and when I think about it - dialogue is definitely a nice strong point of your writing in my opinion!